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We are looking for an enthusiastic and committed person with a good knowledge of the European financial markets to work as a trainee manager in our new Madrid branch. This is a challenging and demanding position for banking and finance graduates. We offer flexible working hours, a fully-supported staff development programme, a clothing allowance and intensive language course in English and/or Spanish. Excellent prospects for promotion.

We are looking for an enthusiastic and committed person with a good knowledge of the European financial markets to work as a trainee manager in our new Madrid branch. This is a challenging and demanding position for banking and finance graduates. We offer flexible working hours, a fully-supported staff development programme, a clothing allowance and intensive language course in English and/or Spanish. Excellent prospects for promotion. KGBmw
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my interest in the position of trainee manager that was advertised in the European financial newspaper on 21/05/2021. I am interested in this position and truly believe that my education and employment background are appropriate for it. My education consists a Bachelor’s Degree first class honours in Finance from University of Mumbai as well as a Master’s Degree in Banking & Marketing from University of London, where I assisted principles of financial market. In the past, I had worked part-time for six months at Capgemini. I am an expert not only in Tally but also in QuickBooks. Additionally, I consider myself to be reliable, hardworking, ambitious and motivated person. I have shown my ability to adapt to new situations also work under pressure throughout my working experience. Finally, the position you offer will give the opportunity to develop my managerial skills and widen my knowledge. Also, I am keen on learning intensive language course in Spanish. Please find my curriculum vitae attached for your perusal, and I look forward to discussing this opportunity further at the interview. Yours faithfully, Monica Brown
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in the position of trainee manager that
was advertised
in the European financial newspaper on 21/05/2021. I
am interested
in this position and
truly
believe that my education and employment background are appropriate for it.

My education consists a Bachelor’s Degree
first
class
honours
in Finance from University of Mumbai
as well
as a Master’s Degree in Banking & Marketing from University of London, where I assisted principles of financial market.

In the past, I had worked part-time for six months at Capgemini. I am an expert not
only
in Tally
but
also
in QuickBooks.
Additionally
, I consider myself to be reliable, hardworking, ambitious and motivated person. I have shown my ability to adapt to new situations
also
work under pressure throughout my working experience.

Finally
, the position you offer will give the opportunity to develop my managerial
skills
and widen my knowledge.
Also
, I am keen on learning intensive language course in Spanish.

Please
find my curriculum vitae attached for your perusal, and I look forward to discussing this opportunity
further
at the interview.

Yours
faithfully
,

Monica Brown
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IELTS letter We are looking for an enthusiastic and committed person with a good knowledge of the European financial markets to work as a trainee manager in our new Madrid branch. This is a challenging and demanding position for banking and finance graduates. We offer flexible working hours, a fully-supported staff development programme, a clothing allowance and intensive language course in English and/or Spanish. Excellent prospects for promotion.

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