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thanks for the accommodation

thanks for the accommodation nVO8K

Dear Brian, Tanks a million for the opportunity to spend a fortnight on your villa. Frankly, I haven’t expected your invitation, what made that holiday the greatest surprise. Moreover, all family members are delighted and send the best wishes to you. I can’t help but notice the most thrilling point of your accommodation. As you may guess, I’m talking about your home gym. What a place! By the way, I really enjoyed our mutual workouts there. No one can deny that doing squats with an ocean view is a truly unique experience, therefore I can say that it was a highlight moment of my vacation. Talking about highlights I would like to share the photos, which I have been taking all 2 weeks. You can find the entire archive in the link attached below. Hope that you will like them, because I have recently finished my photo classes. Anyway, please let me know what do you think about them. I’m looking forward to hearing rom you Stephan

Dear Brian,

Tanks a million for the opportunity to spend a fortnight on your villa. Frankly
, I haven’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 your invitation, what made that holiday the greatest surprise. Moreover
, all family members are delighted
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 the best wishes to you.

I can’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 notice the most thrilling point of your accommodation. As you may guess, I’m talking about your home gym. What a place! By the way, I really
 enjoyed our mutual workouts there. No one can deny that doing squats with an ocean view is a truly
 unique experience, therefore
 I can say that it was a highlight moment of my vacation.

Talking about highlights I would like to share the photos, which I have been taking all 2 weeks. You can find the entire archive in the link attached below. Hope that you will like them, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I have recently finished my photo classes. Anyway, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know what do you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about them.

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Stephan

IELTS letter thanks for the accommodation

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

166 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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