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Dear Brian, Tanks a million for the opportunity to spend a fortnight on your villa. Frankly, I haven’t expected your invitation, what made that holiday the greatest surprise. Moreover, all family members are delighted and send the best wishes to you. I can’t help but notice the most thrilling point of your accommodation. As you may guess, I’m talking about your home gym. What a place! By the way, I really enjoyed our mutual workouts there. No one can deny that doing squats with an ocean view is a truly unique experience, therefore I can say that it was a highlight moment of my vacation. Talking about highlights I would like to share the photos, which I have been taking all 2 weeks. You can find the entire archive in the link attached below. Hope that you will like them, because I have recently finished my photo classes. Anyway, please let me know what do you think about them. I’m looking forward to hearing rom you Stephan
Dear Brian,

Tanks a million for the opportunity to spend a fortnight on your villa.
Frankly
, I haven’t
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your invitation, what made that holiday the greatest surprise.
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, all family members
are delighted
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the best wishes to you.

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notice the most thrilling point of your accommodation. As you may guess, I’m talking about your home gym. What a place! By the way, I
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enjoyed our mutual workouts there. No one can deny that doing squats with an ocean view is a
truly
unique experience,
therefore
I can say that it was a highlight moment of my vacation.

Talking about highlights I would like to share the photos, which I have been taking all 2 weeks. You can find the entire archive in the link attached below. Hope that you will like them,
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I have recently finished my photo classes. Anyway,
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I’m looking forward to hearing
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Stephan
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IELTS letter thanks for the accommodation

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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