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Volunteering request letter to a school where your child studying

Volunteering request letter to a school where your child studying KnPdk
Dear sir, My name is Anu John. I am the mother of Luke Sonu who is studying in grade five. I have been notified by my son that your school is looking for volunteers to travel for the science trip. As I am graduated in physical science, I believe I could do better to make this trip more effective for children. Presently, I am not working so I have enough time to do other activities. Hence, this would be a great opportunity for me to serve children in order to develop their interest towards science. Also, I thought that since I have such a long relationship with the school I would put myself forward. Previously I worked as a science teacher at an elementary school, but I had to quit my job in order to look after my son. I hope my job experience will be an extra advantage to connect with children easily. Considering the above reasons I think you would find me as a suitable candidate for this volunteering programme. I would be obliged to you if you could consider my request. Yours faithfully Anu
Dear sir,

My name is
Anu
John. I am the mother of Luke
Sonu
who is studying in grade five. I have
been notified
by my son that your school is looking for volunteers to travel for the
science
trip. As I
am graduated
in physical
science
, I believe I could do better to
make
this trip more effective for children.

Presently
, I am not working
so
I have
enough
time to do other activities.
Hence
, this would be a great opportunity for me to serve children in order to develop their interest towards
science
.
Also
, I
thought
that since I have such a long relationship with the school I would put myself forward.

Previously I worked as a
science
teacher at an elementary school,
but
I had to quit my job in order to look after my son. I hope my job experience will be an extra advantage to connect with children
easily
.

Considering the above reasons I
think
you would find me as a suitable candidate for this volunteering
programme
. I would
be obliged
to you if you could consider my request.

Yours
faithfully


Anu
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IELTS letter Volunteering request letter to a school where your child studying

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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