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You`ve recently celebrated a significant birthday. Write a letter to a friend expressing how you feel about being this age. What`s good and bad about it?

You`ve recently celebrated a significant birthday. Write a letter to a friend expressing how you feel about being this age. What`s good and bad about it? o5L5V
Dear JudyHow are you doing? Thanks for the last letter and forgive me this so late response. I have been incredibly busy for last month, as I was preparing and planning my 20th birthday party. It took place in my and parent`s house last Saturday and over fifth people came to join the party. Honestly, that was one of the best parties ever, even my friends told that. It`s a pity you could not be there. Anyway, I find this age really exciting! I`m just finishing the high school, preparing for university, so that`s a bit difficult. But i feel more an adult than two or three years ago, which i find good for my self-confidence and satisfaction with myself. I have not found any disadvantage about this age so far, really! Maybe just one little con-I started working 6 months ago and I`m getting payed quite a lot of money. That makes me a bit rain, because i can afford more thinks that i could before. Maybe you would visit me next month and we can go shopping or just to a cafe. I have not seen you for ages! We can discuss on age`s possibilities together. I can`t wait for the 20th birthday party of yours, it will be great. I think then you will find this age as amazing as I do. I`m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Love, Orse
Dear
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JudyHow
are you doing? Thanks for the last letter and forgive me this
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so
late response. I have been
incredibly
busy for last month, as I was preparing and planning my 20th birthday
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party
. It took place in my and
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parent`s
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house
last Saturday and over fifth
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people
came to
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join
the
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party
.
Honestly
, that was one of the best
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parties
ever, even my friends
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told
that.
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It`s
a pity you could not be there. Anyway, I find this
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age
really
exciting!
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I`m
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just
finishing the high school, preparing for university,
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so
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that`s
a bit difficult.
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But
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
feel more an adult than two or three years ago, which
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i
find
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good
for my self-confidence and satisfaction with myself. I have not found any disadvantage about this
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age
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so
far,
really
! Maybe
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just
one
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little
con-I
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started
working 6 months ago and
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I`m
getting
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payed
quite
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a lot of
money. That
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makes
me a
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bit
rain,
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because
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i
can afford more
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thinks
that
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i
could
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before
. Maybe you would visit me
next
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month and
we can go shopping or
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just
to a
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cafe
. I have not
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seen
you for
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ages
! We can discuss on
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age`s
possibilities together. I
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can`t
wait for the 20th birthday
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party
of yours, it will be great. I
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think
then you will find this
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age
as amazing as I do.
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I`m
looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.
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Love
,
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Orse
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IELTS letter You`ve recently celebrated a significant birthday. Write a letter to a friend expressing how you feel about being this age. What`s good and bad about it?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
234 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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