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arrange a conference at the Hotel Excel

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Dear Sir/Madam, I’m writing to ask for information about arrange a conference at the Hotel Excel. We’re looking for place with at least one large room and can accommodate 100 people. We want the room which has fast Wi-Fi because we would like to use photocopying services and projector. We would like to book 70 room for all delegate for two days. Moreover, we want a large parking lot because many delegates are stay far from hotel. And finally, the conference last for two days, so could you tell me what is the best price for this? I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Best Regards,

Dear Sir/Madam,

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I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Best Regards, 