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hotel stay was not good letter to manager

hotel stay was not good letter to manager a7KK9
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in connection with your hotel stay the Marriott from 02/12/2021 to 04/12/2021. The staff were exceptionally welcoming and location was a convenient stay. However, I was disappointed with the room and spend a miserable night. Once I reached the hotel, the temperature dropped to a record-low and an unexpected cold wave hit the city. I can understand the temperature decrease was completely unexpected, however, a 5-star hotel like yours must be prepared. I was extremely disappointed as the heating system in the room stopped working. Moreover, after several complaints a technician came and failed to repair the machine. In addition, when I requested to allocate another room I was instantly turned down with an excuse that it is fully booked. Unfortunately, the night after my work was sleepless despite I was wearing the coat and socks. After reaching home, I found myself catching severe cold and suffering. This is shocking and terribly unpredicted stay for me, even after spending such exorbitant amount, my experience was utterly unsatisfied. I hope to get a discount or refund me with some amount as a token for the terrible experience. In addition, I would recommend you to repair the heating system as to no other guest face the same issue. Yours Sincerely,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter in connection with your hotel stay the Marriott
from 02/12
/2021 to 04/12/2021. The staff were
exceptionally
welcoming and location was a convenient stay.
However
, I
was disappointed
with the room and spend a miserable night.

Once I reached the hotel, the temperature dropped to a record-low and an unexpected
cold
wave hit the city. I can understand the temperature decrease was completely unexpected,
however
, a 5-star hotel like yours
must
be prepared
. I was
extremely
disappointed as the heating system in the room
stopped
working.
Moreover
, after several complaints a technician came and failed to repair the machine.

In addition
, when I requested to allocate another room I was
instantly
turned down with an excuse that it is
fully
booked. Unfortunately, the night after my work was sleepless despite I was wearing the coat and socks. After reaching home, I found myself catching severe
cold
and suffering.

This is shocking and
terribly
unpredicted
stay for me, even after spending such exorbitant amount, my experience was
utterly
unsatisfied. I hope to
get
a discount or refund me with
some
amount as a token for the terrible experience.
In addition
, I would recommend you to repair the heating system as to no other guest face the same issue.

Yours
Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter hotel stay was not good letter to manager

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  American English
6 paragraphs
217 words
6.5
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