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Complaints to your friend

Complaints to your friend Bg3Nd

Dear Ali, I’m writing this letter to you to say that my address was changed, and now I have been living in my new house for three days ago. As you know my old house was somewhat ruined and that was situated in a poor and crowded area. I’ve borrowed a loan from the bank, and I had saved some money. Therefore, I could buy a new apartment with all those money. My new apartment is located in the city center. My house is big enough and likewise has two bedrooms that each one has a shared balcony. Which has a spectacular panoramic view of the city. It’s a modern house so many of my household appliances are equipped with the Internet that we can control those with a smartphone. Actually, for celebrating my annual wedding, I’ll take a party in my new house. Many of my colleagues and our old friends take part in this party, so I wish to see you next week on Saturday evening. I hope to see you at my birthday party! Best regards, Amin

Dear Ali,

I’m writing this letter to you to say that my address was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I have been living in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 for three days ago.

As you know my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 was somewhat ruined and that was situated
 in a poor and crowded area. I’ve borrowed a loan from the bank, and I had saved This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 money. Therefore
, I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 apartment with all Did you mean "this money" or "those moneys", "those monies"?this moneythose moneysthose monies
those money
.

My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 apartment is located
 in the city center. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 and likewise
 has two bedrooms that each one has a shared balcony. “Which” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Which
 has a spectacular panoramic view of the city. It’s a modern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of my household appliances are equipped
 with the Internet that we can control those with a smartphone.

Actually, for celebrating my annual wedding, I’ll take a party in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
 of my colleagues and our This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 friends This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in this party, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I wish to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you next
 week on Saturday evening.

I hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you at my birthday party!

Best regards,

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