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Letter to neighbor to take care of his dog

Letter to neighbor to take care of his dog Ky6Pw

Dear Mr. Thomas, I am writing this letter to bring your attention to the problems me and my family members are facing due to you dog who barks the entire day and night. I understand that you have recently adopted your dog Micky and this is a new place for him, however, his continuous barking is inconvenient and disturbing for my family. My parents and children find it difficult to sleep peacefully in the night which might affect their health adversely. One of my cousins was receiving some complaints about her dog who used to tear plastic bags of food items kept in front of the doors of the people staying nearby. She then decided to hire a trainer for her dog to make him learn some of the basic rules and habits which worked for her. Can you please also consider the option of hiring a profession trainer for your dog? I am sure that it will help you to manage him better. I hope that you would give a thought to my suggestion. I would look forward to a positive response. Yours Sincerely, Sam Peters

Dear Mr. Thomas,

I am writing this letter to bring your attention to the problems me and my family members are facing due to you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpuppypup
dog
 who barks the entire day and night.

I understand that you have recently adopted your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpuppypup
dog
 Micky and this is a new place for him, however
, his continuous barking is inconvenient and disturbing for my family. My parents and children find it difficult to sleep peacefully
 in the night which might affect their health adversely
.

One of my cousins was receiving This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 complaints about her You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpuppypup
dog
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to tear plastic bags of food items This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in front of the doors of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 staying nearby. She then decided to hire a trainer for her You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpuppypup
dog
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 him learn If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 basic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 and habits which worked for her.

Can you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
also
 consider the option of hiring a profession trainer for your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpuppypup
dog
? I am sure that it will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you to manage him better.

I hope that you would give a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 to my suggestion. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would look forward to a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response.

Yours Sincerely
,

Sam Peters