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Friend coming to study in my town

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Dear Aston, I’m delighted to hearing you coming to Bulandshahr to study next year. I’m sure that you will enjoy studying here. Moreover, I can help you in finding a cheap but comfortable place, you can stay with me and my family if you prefer. Finding a part-time job isn’t easy here but I’m here to guide you. Also, you can join some native language learning communities which will help you understand our culture as well, although, most people know English here. For transportation, you can hire a bike for rent in case your college is far. Send me more details on when exactly are you coming, so that, I can pick you up from the airport. However, you can grab a taxi in case I didn’t show up. I’m looking forward to seeing you soon and pray for your prosperous life here. Love Yours Avneesh.
Dear Aston,

I’m delighted to hearing you coming to
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Bulandshahr
to study
next
year. I’m sure that you will enjoy studying here.

Moreover
, I can
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help
you in finding a
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cheap
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but
comfortable place, you can stay with me and my family if you prefer. Finding a part-time job isn’t easy here
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but
I’m here to guide you.
Also
, you can
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join
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some
native language learning communities which will
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help
you understand our culture
as well
, although, most
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people
know English here. For transportation, you can hire a bike for rent in case your college is far.

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Send
me more
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details
on when exactly are you coming,
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so
that, I can pick you up from the airport.
However
, you can grab a taxi in case I didn’t
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show
up. I’m looking forward to seeing you
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soon
and pray for your prosperous life here.

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Love


Yours
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Avneesh
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IELTS letter Friend coming to study in my town

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  American English
6 paragraphs
146 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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