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Think of a holiday place you visited where they had a beautiful postcards. Write a postcard from there to your English class

Think of a holiday place you visited where they had a beautiful postcards. Write a postcard from there to your English class pKxMm

Hello Dear Ann Thank you for your letters. Today I want to write about our travel. Last year, my family and I went a cost. We were having an excellent time on the cost. I saw waves and listened to the ocean. Then, my mother and I discovered pretty things and we ate taste new foods. That time I drew. My parents waves me and other. The weather was very nice. The sun was shining. We are going to go my grandparents next year because there are lots of mountains. Please write to me about your travels. Love Yulduz

Hello Dear Ann

Thank you for your letters. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
 I want to write about our travel.

Last year,Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
my family and I went a cost. We were having an excellent time on the cost. Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 waves and listened to the ocean. Then, my mother and I discovered pretty Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).things, and
things and
 we ate taste new foods. That time I drew. Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
My parents You should probably use "wave".wave
waves
 me and other. Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
The weather was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 nice. The sun was shining. We are going to go my grandparents next
 year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 there are lots of mountains.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 write to me about your travels.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love


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