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There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: • introduce yourself • describe the importance of the park • say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: • introduce yourself • describe the importance of the park • say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan a939
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Dave, my house is located on Hamilton street, there is a park nearby named Victoria park. I have read in the newspaper that recently, council decided to sell this park, and all individuals who are living near the park are not happy regarding this matter. This park has various slides which young children use after school on daily basis and have beautiful garden, and due to this facility, all adults are used to gather in evening for meeting their neighbors. A plethora of persons do meditation and exercise in the morning as well as in the evening. If local folk loose this amazing park then they will not have an alternative for this. Most importantly, council did not aware us about this which is totally illegal. According to the law, council must inform the individuals 30 days prior to taking any decision regarding the public issue, and, of course, this is the local crowd matter. If they will not change their decision then we all locals will file a law-suit in the court against the council. I hope you will print this letter in your newspaper as for public interest. Yours faithfully, Dilpreet.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Dave, my
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house
is located
on Hamilton street, there is a
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park
nearby named Victoria
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
. I have read in the newspaper that recently, council decided to sell this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
, and all individuals who are living near the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
are not happy regarding this matter.

This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
has various slides which young children
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
after school on daily basis and have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
garden, and due to this facility, all adults are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to gather in evening for meeting their neighbors. A plethora of persons do meditation and exercise in the morning
as well
as in the evening. If local folk loose this amazing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
then they will not have an alternative for this.

Most
importantly
, council did not aware us about this which is
totally
illegal. According to the law, council
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
inform the individuals 30 days prior to taking any decision regarding the public issue, and,
of course
, this is the local crowd matter. If they will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
their decision then we all locals will file a law-suit in the court against the council.

I hope you will print this letter in your newspaper as for public interest.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Dilpreet
.

IELTS letter There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: • introduce yourself • describe the importance of the park • say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

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