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There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am a regular user of your transportation service and take your buses to travel to and from my office. I am writing to bring to your attention a few critical issues inflicted upon me and other commuters who use your service. I am hoping you would address these issues promptly. First, during the last couple of weeks, your buses are making recurring delays and this is affecting our arrival in our workplaces on time. To add more grief, a few buses do not arrive at all. A number of times, I had to wait for more than an hour and then hail a taxi to reach my office. Finally, some buses are full when they arrive and cannot take any more passenger from the Victoria Stand. This situation forces me and many other travellers to either take the congested bus and stand all the way in a miserable condition or wait for the next bus. I believe this would reduce people's trust in your service. I suggest that you add a few more transport to accommodate the passengers and manage the timetable rigidly. Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon. Yours faithfully, John Andrews Dear Sir or Madam, I am a regular user of your transportation service and take your buses to travel to and from my office. I am writing to bring to your attention a few critical issues inflicted upon me and other commuters who use your service. I am hoping you would address these issues promptly. First, during the last couple of weeks, your buses are making recurring delays and this is affecting our arrival in our workplaces on time. To add more grief, a few buses do not arrive at all. A number of times, I had to wait for more than an hour and then hail a taxi to reach my office. Finally, some buses are full when they arrive and cannot take any more passenger from the Victoria Stand. This situation forces me and many other travellers to either take the congested bus and stand all the way in a miserable condition or wait for the next bus. I believe this would reduce people's trust in your service. I suggest that you add a few more transport to accommodate the passengers and manage the timetable rigidly. Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon. Yours faithfully, John Andrews
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a regular user of your transportation
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service
and take your buses to travel to and from my
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office
. I am writing to bring to your
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attention
a few critical
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issues
inflicted upon me and
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other
commuters who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
. I am hoping you would address these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issues
promptly
.
First
, during the last couple of weeks, your buses are making recurring delays and this is affecting our arrival in our workplaces on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
more grief, a few buses do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
arrive
at all. A number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
times
, I had to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wait
for more than an hour and then hail a taxi to reach my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
office
.
Finally
,
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some
buses are full when they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
arrive
and cannot take any more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
passenger
from the Victoria
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Stand
. This situation forces me and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
Possible spelling mistake. ‘travellers’ is British English.
travellers
to either take the congested bus and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stand
all the way in a miserable condition or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wait
for the
next
bus. I believe this would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's trust in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
. I suggest that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
a
Possible agreement error. The noun transport seems to be countable; consider using: “few more transports”.
few more transport
to accommodate the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
passengers
and manage the timetable
rigidly
. Thank you for giving the matter your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
attention
and I hope to hear your reply
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
. Yours
faithfully
, John Andrews

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a regular user of your transportation
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
and take your buses to travel to and from my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
office
. I am writing to bring to your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
attention
a few critical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issues
inflicted upon me and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
commuters who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am hoping you would address these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issues
promptly
.

First
, during the last couple of weeks, your buses are making recurring delays and this is affecting our arrival in our workplaces on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
more grief, a few buses do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
arrive
at all. A number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
times
, I had to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wait
for more than an hour and then hail a taxi to reach my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
office
.
Finally
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
buses are full when they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
arrive
and cannot take any more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
passenger
from the Victoria
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Stand
. This situation forces me and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
Possible spelling mistake. ‘travellers’ is British English.
travellers
to either take the congested bus and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stand
all the way in a miserable condition or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wait
for the
next
bus. I believe this would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's trust in your service.

I suggest that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
a
Possible agreement error. The noun transport seems to be countable; consider using: “few more transports”.
few more transport
to accommodate the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
passengers
and manage the timetable
rigidly
.

Thank you for giving the matter your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
attention
and I hope to hear your reply
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

John Andrews
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IELTS letter There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily.

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