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There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..........., You should write at least 150 wo

There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . , You should write at least 150 wo g5571
Dear sir/madam I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards fews critical issue in public bus service. I am using public transport from past 3 years from tuxedo court to downtown for my office. First, in past two weeks, buses are making recurring delays which is affecting our arrival to the workplace locations. In brief, few buses are not even arriving on time. Many times, I had to wait more than hour and then i had to took taxi to reach to office. Finally, Some of the buses are full when they arrived which results they can not take more passengers. This situation forced me and other commuters to either take congested bus and stand all the way in miserable condition or wait for next bus. I suggest that you should add extra buses on busiest locations of the city to accommodate all the passengers and manage timetable rigidly. I hope you will consider this matter and find suitable solution. Thank you. Yours faithfully, John.
Dear sir/madam

I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards
fews
critical issue in public bus service. I am using public transport from past 3 years from tuxedo court to downtown for my office.

First
, in past two weeks, buses are making recurring delays which is affecting our
arrival to the workplace
locations.
In brief
, few buses are not even arriving on time.
Many
times, I had to wait more than hour and then
i
had to took taxi to reach to office.
Finally
,
Some of the
buses are full when they arrived which results they can not take more passengers. This situation forced me and other commuters to either take congested bus and stand all the way in miserable condition or wait for
next
bus.

I suggest that you should
add
extra buses on busiest locations of the city to accommodate all the passengers and manage timetable
rigidly
. I hope you will consider this matter and find suitable solution.

Thank you.

Yours
faithfully
,

John.
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IELTS letter There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . , You should write at least 150 wo

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