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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have

You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have KwwpL

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to you with regards to the job opportunity in your Petro-Canada Gas Station which is situated on 44 Ave and 124 street in Surrey, BC. I am 23 years old and I am currently studying my major in business management in Columbia College Vancouver. Let me explain further more, I am looking for a part-time supervisor job so that I can fund my college tuition fees. Moreover, I want to gain some more experience in business work, thereby it can help me in future. In relation to my experience, I attached my documents of previous work history of 6 months as a supervisor in Richmond Liquor Shop. I worked there after my diploma was completed. Additionally, i can speak three different languages which are English, Punjabi and Hindi and I can help in making schedule, creating payroll and so on. I look forward to your reply. Your's Sincerely, Gurleen Singh

Dear Sir / Madam,

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 studying my major in business management in Columbia College Vancouver.

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 more experience in business work, thereby it can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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In relation to my experience, I attached my documents of previous work history of 6 months as a supervisor in Richmond Liquor Shop. I worked there after my diploma was completed
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so
 on.

I look forward to your reply.

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