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You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at sea hotel. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving coma what type of humour do you like and ask them how much the weekend would will cost also enquire about activities and place of interest near the hotel

You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at sea hotel. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving coma what type of humour do you like and ask them how much the weekend would will cost also enquire about activities and place of interest near the hotel bYYGW
I am writing with regard to seek information about the hotel near the seaside for spending a weekend. I would like to inform you that I have received my tickets for Goa Saturday and Sunday my flight will be land at 6 p. m. so I will be in the hotel around 7 o'clock and the following day at 6 p. m. I will left the hotel. I need to spacious rooms full stop one for my me and my wife and other for my children. If applicable, I want these rooms where a wonderful view could easily see. Also, could you please tell me how much cost is it for and how could I make payments. Moreover korma would you tell me some popular places nearby the sea and are watching worthwhile. Also please inform me about different activities for my children as they have a desire to partake in those activitiesI look forward to hearing prompt replyYours faithfully, Kanwaljeet kaur
I am writing with regard to seek information about the hotel near the seaside for spending a weekend.

I would like to inform you that I have received my tickets for Goa Saturday and Sunday my flight will be land at 6 p. m.
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I will be in the hotel around 7 o'clock and the following day at 6 p. m.
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will
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left
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need to spacious rooms full
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one for my me and my wife and other for my children. If applicable, I want these rooms where a wonderful view could
easily
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Also
, could you
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me how much cost is it for and how could I
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payments.

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korma would you
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popular places nearby the sea and are watching worthwhile.
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inform me about
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activities for my children as they have a desire to partake in those
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look forward to hearing prompt
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Kanwaljeet
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kaur

IELTS letter You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at sea hotel. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving coma what type of humour do you like and ask them how much the weekend would will cost also enquire about activities and place of interest near the hotel

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4 paragraphs
161 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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