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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take doomd
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you that I can not continue with course as nowadays I am busy a lot due to high work pressure. As you know about my job it is banking job and now it's closing time for bank so there is a lot of pressure coming from head department to complete recoveries as soon as possible before end of the closing. And just because of this I used to work till late night in office and I find myself in a situation that it is not possible for me to attend evening courses. I know how course is important for me but at this time it is difficult to me to attend course due to closing in bank. Once this time will go away and I will get time I will inform you, which I think once closing will be over I will be able to continue with course. I hope you will consider this situation and allow to me to take sometime off from my course and will join as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Robert Browling
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I can not continue with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
as nowadays I am busy a lot due to high work pressure.

As you know about my job it is banking job and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
it's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
closing
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time
for bank
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so
there is
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a lot of
pressure coming from head department to complete recoveries as
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soon
as possible
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before
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the
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closing
. And
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just
because of this
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to work till late night in office and I find myself in a situation that it is not possible for me to attend evening courses.

I know how
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course
is
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important
for me
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but
at this
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time
it is
The usual preposition to follow "difficult" is 'for" when followed by a pronoun. "Difficult" and "to" only appear together when "to" forms part of an infinitive structure. Did you mean "difficult for me"?
difficult to me
to attend
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course
due to
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closing
in bank. Once this
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time
will go away and I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
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time
I will inform you, which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
once
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closing
will be over I will be able to continue with course.

I hope you will consider this situation and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
to me to take sometime off from my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
and will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

Yours
faithfully
,

Robert
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Browling

IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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  American English
7 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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