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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..........., You should write at least 150 words.

There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . , E12L
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to bring it your notice about the interruptions of bus services in our town. There has been several issues regarding your company's bus services. Firstly, of late, there numerous occasions, where buses were not running as per the schedule. Secondly, without prior notice, many bus services are being cancelled. Finally, detouring of bus routes are creating confusion among the people of our town who commute daily to their respective offices. I could not reach the my office on several days due to these issues and forcing me to use the taxi services, which are quiet expensive. Moreover, these disruptions are causing deep trouble to the older and physically handicapped people. Increasing the number of buses, proper scheduling and prior intimation of any detours would address these issues. Therefore, I request to you to consider my suggestions and take required action
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to bring it your notice about the interruptions of bus
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services
in our town. There has been several issues regarding your
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company
's bus
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
services
.
Firstly
, of late, there numerous occasions, where buses were not running as per the schedule.
Secondly
, without prior notice,
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bus
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services
are
being cancelled
.
Finally
, detouring of bus routes are creating confusion among the
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people
of our town who commute daily to their respective offices.

I could not reach
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the my office
on several days due to these issues and forcing me to
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use
the taxi
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
services
, which are quiet expensive.
Moreover
, these disruptions are causing deep trouble to the older and
physically
handicapped
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people
. Increasing the number of buses, proper scheduling and prior intimation of any detours would address these issues.

Therefore
, I request to you to consider my suggestions and take required action
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IELTS letter There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . ,

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  American English
4 paragraphs
146 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..........., You should write at least 150 words.