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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..........., You should write at least 150 words.

There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . , 5VDP
Dear Sir, I am writing this to complain about the issues persisting with the bus service in Brampton street from last two weeks. In context to its reliability, the timings of the bus shuffled a lot in the past few days. Although I always reach the bus stop around 10 minutes in advance, it is hard for me and others waiting for transport service to board it on time. As I worked as a Marketing Manager at Promax and has a morning shift that starts at 8: 30, It became really hard for me to reach the office on time because your company`s bus is the only medium to commute from my place to office at that time. Considering the consequences each one is facing, I would really appreciate if you can schedule the bus timings accurately and constant route plan, So that there should not be any misconception about timing which would suffer our daily routine. Looking forward to a positive response from you. Yours Sincerely Amandeep
Dear Sir,

I am writing this to complain about the issues persisting with the bus service in Brampton street from last two weeks.

In context to its reliability, the timings of the bus shuffled a lot in the past few days. Although I always reach the bus
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stop
around 10 minutes in advance, it is
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hard
for me
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and others
waiting for transport service to board it on time.

As I worked as a Marketing Manager at
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Promax
and has a morning shift that
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starts
at 8: 30, It became
really
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hard
for me to reach the office on time
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because
your
The character between 'company' and 's' is an accent character, not a standard apostrophe character. Use "company’s" (curly apostrophe) or "company's" (straight apostrophe).
company`s
bus is the
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only
medium to commute from my place to office at that time.

Considering the consequences each one is facing, I would
really
appreciate if you can schedule the bus timings
accurately
and constant route plan,
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So
that there should not be any misconception about timing which would suffer our daily routine.

Looking forward to a
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positive
response from you.

Yours
Sincerely


Amandeep

IELTS letter There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . ,

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