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You have recently landed in a foreign country on a work visa and need information about the place in and around the city. Write a letter to the relocation assistance provider seeking help and in your letter, Write why you are writing the letter What kind of information you want How and by when you can get the requested information

Dear Mr Sam, I safely landed in Canada on work visa with my family last week. I am writing this letter with regards to obtain the information about the places in Toronto and its nearby areas. As my job commences next month, we are planning to explore the beautiful city of Toronto and its suburb areas for next few days. My wife is fascinated by architectural beauty of this town which convinced us to visit various other places at a same time. Toronto is well-known for its historical monuments and elegant gardens so, we would like to get the list of such kind of places where we can spend some quality times. It would be great of you can directly send the list of attractions via email. However, if you can message me on instant messenger app, it will be convenient for both of us. I hope you will share the list very soon as we are excited on this. Thank you for your time. Yours sincerely, Malhar Jivrajani
Dear Mr Sam,

I
safely
landed in Canada on work visa with my family last week. I am writing this letter
with regards to
obtain the information about the places in Toronto and its nearby areas.

As my job commences
next
month, we are planning to explore the
beautiful
city of Toronto and its suburb areas for
next
few days. My wife
is fascinated
by architectural beauty of this town which convinced us to visit various other places at a same time.

Toronto is well-known for its historical monuments and elegant gardens
so
, we would like to
get
the list of such kind of places where we can spend
some
quality times.

It would be great of you can
directly
send
the list of attractions via email.
However
, if you can message me on instant messenger app, it will be convenient for both of us.

I hope you will share the list
very
soon
as we
are excited
on this. Thank you for your time.

Yours
sincerely
,

Malhar
Jivrajani
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IELTS letter You have recently landed in a foreign country on a work visa and need information about the place in and around the city. Write a letter to the relocation assistance provider seeking help and in your letter, Write why you are writing the letter What kind of information you want How and by when you can get the requested information

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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