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You have won a competition and won a prize Write a letter to a friend and invit Him

Dear AliI am writing to inform you that my college have prize distribution ceremony on 25th of February. So, it is allowed to call any family member or friends that's why I am inviting you on that festival. The prizing ceremony is to be planned to acknowledge the winners of intercollegiate competition which was held last month. I supposed to invite you on that festival but you were busy in your exams. However, according to your schedule you are free these days. So, you can join me in this event. My college planned one day prize distribution event. It will start in the morning of 25th February. We have 4 segments to be awarded the prizes. First will be the drama competition, in which I have participated. I am very hopeful for the any recognition, I keep my finger crossed. Than the music, comedy, stall & model competition will be awarded. I can the the whole event will be finished with 3 hours. I am sure you gonna enjoy the show. I am looking forward to have you hereYours sincerelyAhmad Mustafa

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.AlibiAliAIIAPIICliiLii
AliI
Did you mean "am I"?am I
am
 writing to inform you that my college have prize distribution ceremony on 25th of February. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to call any family member or friends that's why I am inviting you on that festival. The prizing ceremony is to be planned
 to acknowledge the winners of intercollegiate competition which was held
 last month. I supposed to invite you on that festival This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 you were busy in your exams. However
, according to your schedule you are free these days. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 me in this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
.

My college planned one day prize distribution This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
. It will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 in the morning of 25th February. We have 4 segments to be awarded
 the prizes. First
 will be the drama competition, in which I have participated. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 hopeful for the any recognition, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 my finger crossed. Did you mean "Then"?Then
Than
 the music, comedy, stall & model competition will be awarded
. I can Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.the
the the
 whole This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 will be finished
 with 3 hours.

I am sure you The word 'gonna' is informal. Consider an alternative.going to
gonna
 enjoy the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am looking forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to having".to having
to have
 you Possible spelling mistake found.harborsHarcourt
hereYours
Possible spelling mistake found.sincerely Ahmad
sincerelyAhmad
 Mustafa