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There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive.your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. write a letter to your manager.In your letter *describe the complaints that have been made *say why the reception area is important *suggest how the reception area could be improved

There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. write a letter to your manager. In your letter *describe the complaints that have been made *say why the reception area is important *suggest how the reception area could be improved OBPM
Dear Mr. Mehta, I am writing this letter to suggest how the reception area could be larger and to convey to you the complaints about the reception area which I got from visitors. let me explain about complaints in more detail. I got many complaints but I listed a few which are important. Visitors find less space to make queues. Apart from it, there are no chairs due to the small area of the reception counter. Thus, if any senior citizen comes then he has to sit outside the reception area. Moreover, the reception area plays a vital role in the company because the customers first go to the reception counter for inquiries related to the multiple tasks of the company. So, it is the first place where all visitors gather. Hence, the reception counter should be large in the company. I suggest making it large by removing two side tables near the reception area. There should be strict to allow only five visitors in a queue others need to wait in the waiting area. In addition, we may arrange seats in the waiting area. I hope you find good suggestions. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Amita Dholakia
Dear Mr.
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Mehta
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reception
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area
could be larger and to convey to you the complaints about the
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which I
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. Visitors find less space to
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queues. Apart from it, there are no chairs due to the
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small
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of the
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counter.
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then he
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sit outside the
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area.

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, the
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plays a vital role in the
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company
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because
the customers
first
go to the
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reception
counter for inquiries related to the multiple tasks of the
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company
.
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, it is the
first
place where all visitors gather.
Hence
, the
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counter should be large in the
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company
.

I suggest making it large by removing two side tables near the
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reception
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area
. There should be strict to
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allow
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only
five visitors in a queue others need to wait in the waiting
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area
.
In addition
, we may arrange seats in the waiting area.

I hope you find
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good
suggestions.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Amita
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Dholakia
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IELTS letter There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. write a letter to your manager. In your letter *describe the complaints that have been made *say why the reception area is important *suggest how the reception area could be improved

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