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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: • Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly • Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • Suggest what should be done about the problem

The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: • Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly • Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • Suggest what should be done about the problem 2NXk
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Alex, and I am the president of the Gulberg apartments. I am writing this letter to complain about the litter collection system, which is not in good condition, and it is creating several problems for the people who live in society. The municipal corporation has transferred the contract to another vendor to collect the household garbage. The process of collecting trash is manual and the workers are reluctant to do that, and this is why the system is not functioning properly. We are facing enormous problems because there is a huge garbage bin in front of the playing garden. Children are not able to play their games, elderly people are unable to walk. Moreover, it is releasing toxic gases which are affecting everybody’s health. I would like to suggest to you some solutions to resolve this problem. Firstly, you can transfer the contract to the previous vendor or change the contractor. Secondly, local administration should provide the proper equipment and tools to collect rubbish. Thirdly, please provide different coloured bins to segregate the scrap from recyclable trash. I hope you will consider my suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Alex, and I am the president of the
Gulberg
apartments. I am writing this letter to complain about the litter collection system, which is not in
good
condition, and it is creating several problems for the
people
who
live
in society.

The municipal corporation has transferred the contract to another vendor to collect the household garbage. The process of collecting trash is manual and the workers are reluctant to do that, and this is why the system is not functioning
properly
.

We are facing enormous problems
because
there is a huge garbage bin in front of the playing garden. Children are not able to play their games, elderly
people
are unable to walk.
Moreover
, it is releasing toxic gases which are affecting everybody’s health.

I would like to suggest to you
some
solutions to resolve this problem.
Firstly
, you can transfer the contract to the previous vendor or
change
the contractor.
Secondly
, local administration should provide the proper equipment and tools to collect rubbish.
Thirdly
,
please
provide
different
coloured
bins to segregate the scrap from recyclable trash.

I hope you will consider my suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: • Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly • Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • Suggest what should be done about the problem

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  American English
7 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
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