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The skills needed to be a successful student

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Hello every one, I am Elaf Mohammed and I am happy to make a short presentation about the skills needed to be a successful student. Every person who studies in college or in school, he or she is called a student. However, not every student is successful. SO who is the successful? Of course, the successful student is who attends every lessons or lectures, gets good grades in exams, respects teachers and doctors and helps friends. Besides what I mentioned, the sudent needs some important skills like communication skills, time management, self-confidence and emotional intelligence. in my speaking I'm gonna shed light on time management AND emotional intelligence. First, Time management in simpley way is invest time to do the useful things and not waste it on the trivial things. Time management is the student’s weapon to achieve the success, whether in study or in future work. And having this skill has beneficial effects, 1 The student avoids the problem of *lessons accumulation* by determining certain hours to review lessons daily. 2 Those who organize their time get high scores on their exams compared to those who don't. 3 also this skill helps the student to lead a healthy study life, as he gives everything his right from rest and study. In contrast, a student who does not organize his time feels psychological pressure, and this negatively affects his academic achievement. And I want to recommend some things that may help you in organizing your time is setting priorities and using Planner. Second, emotional intelligence. . How we can explain this skill, it is simply A person's ability to identify, control and express emotions. Students with higher levels of emotional intelligence are able to better manage themselves and relate to others around them. On the other hand, students who lack emotional intelligence can become less connected to school, that is mean negatively affecting performance in the classroom. And improving emotional intelligence in students can help them in many points: 1. Improving self-awareness, by being aware of their emotions. 2. Managing stress, by recognizing what is causing stress and how to solve it. 3. Self motivation by Willingness to push themselves to meet goals. 4. Making good decisions, by using their emotions to choose the best path. 5. The last one Developing relationships, by being aware of other’s emotion. In conclusion, Although students need to study hard, they have to seek smart skills and make them habits to achieve their goals fast. Time and the ability to manage ourselves are very important and what I mentioned today achieve them. Thank you for your attention.
Hello every one, I am
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in college or in school, he or she
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AND
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intelligence.

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to do the useful things and not waste it on the trivial things.
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And having this
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has beneficial effects, 1 The
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avoids the problem of *lessons accumulation* by determining certain hours to review lessons daily. 2 Those
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organize their
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time
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high scores on their exams compared to those
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also
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to lead a healthy
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life, as he gives everything his right from rest and
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student
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feels psychological pressure, and this
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things that may
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is setting priorities and using Planner.

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intelligence
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Students with higher levels of
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are able to better manage themselves and relate to others around them.

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students
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lack
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can become less connected to school,
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And improving
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3. Self motivation by Willingness to push themselves to
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4. Making
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decisions, by using their emotions to choose the best path.

5. The last one Developing relationships, by being aware of other’s emotion.

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achieve them. Thank you for your attention.
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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