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The office you work in does not have any cafeteria for staff. Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff. In your letter, you should tell, what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff how you feel about it what suggestions you have about setting up a cafeteria

The office you work in does not have any cafeteria for staff. Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff. In your letter, you should tell, what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff how you feel about it what suggestions you have about setting up a cafeteria 16gL
Dear Sir or Madam, Hope I did not catch you at a busy time since I am sure that you have a number of other necessary priorities at work to take care of. on the contrary, the issue, I want to raise here, is also equally great for our office staff. The reason for which I am writing tDear Sir or Madam, Therefore, I would like to request you to set up a staff cafeteria in the large empty room at the corner of our office, which remains unused most of the time. That will make sure that our staff have at least one less issue to worry about when trying to be more productive and efficient at work. I hope you will consider the issue and arrange to set up a cafeteria in the near future. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Andrew Jones Andrew Jones
Dear Sir or Madam,

Hope I did not catch you at a busy time since I am sure that you have a number of other necessary priorities at work to take care of.
on the contrary
, the issue, I want to raise here, is
also
equally
great for our office staff.

The reason for which I am writing
tDear
Sir or Madam,

Therefore
, I would like to request you to set up a staff cafeteria in the large empty room at the corner of our office, which remains unused most of the time. That will
make
sure that our staff have at least one less issue to worry about when trying to be more productive and efficient at work.

I hope you will consider the issue and arrange to set up a cafeteria in the near future. Thank you in advance.

Yours
faithfully
,

Andrew Jones

Andrew Jones
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IELTS letter The office you work in does not have any cafeteria for staff. Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff. In your letter, you should tell, what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff how you feel about it what suggestions you have about setting up a cafeteria

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  American English
8 paragraphs
146 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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