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The news company is going to start a new program on TV about a particular place. Write a letter to offer your suggestions on what the program should be like. Include in your letter- how you know about that place, what suggestion you would like to make, why you are offering these suggestions.

The news company is going to start a new program on TV about a particular place. Write a letter to offer your suggestions on what the program should be like. Include in your letter- how you know about that place, what suggestion you would like to make, why you are offering these suggestions. OVgxj
Dear Sir, I am Joan from Delhi. I purpose to writing my letter is to offer a number of suggestions about the program you are going to start in the near future that might help you. One of my friend belong to kurukshatra, that's how I know few detail about that area. There are few thinks which no one covers, consequently I want you to look after them. One major thing is to talk to older people more because they will provide exact data. Another important ascept is to cover how the management is becoming careless about those anciant places for mentanance and clearance. Kurakshatra is such a nice place to visit but due to lack to attention by media those areas are not paid attention, that's the reason I request you to pay attention on by opinion. I hope you would consider and mark my words. I will look forward to watch your program soon. Yours Truelly, Joan
Dear Sir, I am Joan from Delhi. I purpose to writing my letter is to offer a number of suggestions about the program you are going to
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about that area. There are few
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which no one covers,
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people
more
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they will provide exact data. Another
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important
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is to cover how the management is becoming careless about those
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places for
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mentanance
and clearance.
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is such a nice place to visit
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due to lack to attention by media those areas are not paid attention, that's the reason I request you to pay attention on by opinion. I hope you would consider and mark my words. I will look forward to
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watch
your program
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soon
. Yours
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Joan
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IELTS letter The news company is going to start a new program on TV about a particular place. Write a letter to offer your suggestions on what the program should be like. Include in your letter- how you know about that place, what suggestion you would like to make, why you are offering these suggestions.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
158 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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