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The news company is going to start a new program on TV about a particular place. Write a letter to offer your suggestions on what the program should be like. In your letter: How you know about that place? What suggestions you would like to make? Why you are offering these suggestions?

The news company is going to start a new program on TV about a particular place. Write a letter to offer your suggestions on what the program should be like. In your letter: How you know about that place? What suggestions you would like to make? Why you are offering these suggestions? 1551N
Dear Sir, I am John Smith living in 67, Parkinson Street, Montreal. The purpose of writing this letter to give some information regards of your upcoming program related to special place. The place name is “The Royal Cafe” which is located near the Quebec region in the central area. It is having sea view with dinning at river side. Not only has this but also provided the recreational facilities as well as leisure activities. Therefore, all and all it is package of good material for attraction. I came to know about this place last weekend when I visited it with my friends for the celebration of our collage farewell. Thus, I thought I must share this experience with you. It is built recently and just opened before 2 months therefore, it is not in the public’s eye but sooner it will be. There are two reasons behind this suggestion. The foremost one, the place itself deserves it to be famous and getting popularity among the nation’s community. Apart from this, this region is under developed and if this program focuses on this area, the locals get the recognition and more numbers of customers visit that place. As a result, the locals get opportunity to earn. Hope you will consider my suggestion about your TV program. Yours truly, John Smith.
Dear Sir,

I am John Smith living in 67, Parkinson Street, Montreal. The purpose of writing this letter to give
some
information regards of your upcoming program related to special place.

The
place
name is “The Royal
Cafe
” which
is located
near the Quebec region in the central area. It is having sea view with dinning at river side. Not
only
has this
but
also
provided the recreational facilities
as well
as leisure activities.
Therefore
,
all and all
it is package of
good
material for attraction. I came to know about this
place
last weekend when I visited it with my friends for the celebration of our collage farewell.
Thus
, I
thought
I
must
share this experience with you. It
is built
recently and
just
opened
before
2 months
therefore
, it is not in the public’s eye
but
sooner it will be.

There are two reasons behind this suggestion. The foremost one, the
place
itself deserves it to be
famous
and getting popularity among the nation’s community. Apart from this, this region is under developed and if this program focuses on this area, the locals
get
the recognition and more numbers of customers visit that
place
.
As a result
, the locals
get
opportunity to earn.

Hope you will consider my suggestion about your TV program.

Yours
truly
,

John Smith.
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IELTS letter The news company is going to start a new program on TV about a particular place. Write a letter to offer your suggestions on what the program should be like. In your letter: How you know about that place? What suggestions you would like to make? Why you are offering these suggestions?

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
219 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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