Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

a museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary work. YOU WOULD LIKE TO some voluntary work at the museum.

a museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary work. YOU WOULD LIKE TO some voluntary work at the museum. XGGDP

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Gulnar Yaylymova, I am a student, and I am writing to you to express my interest in voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. I have recently knew that you are looking for people to do some part-time voluntary/unpaid jobs at the museum. As I live in neighborhood with the place, I would like to propose myself for such work. As am a student currently, I need to have some experience in community services for my curriculum in the end of this year. So voluntary work at your museum will be a great opportunity for it. Additionally, I study history, it is my major at my University program, and can provide guide services in historical department of the museum. Also, I speak Spanish and French, so it may be useful in providing services for foreign tourists if needed. As I mentioned above, I study at the University, and according to my learning schedule, I will be able to work only afternoons of Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays. If you will accept me as a candidate and my schedule is convenient for you, I may start immediately next week. Waiting for your reply, Thank you in advance, Best regards, Gulnar Yaylymova

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Possible spelling mistake found.UlnarG ulnarGunnar
Gulnar
Possible spelling mistake found.
Yaylymova
, I am a student, and I am writing to you to express my interest in voluntary/unpaid work at the museum.

I have recently Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "known".known
knew
 that you are looking for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 part-time voluntary/unpaid jobs at the museum. As I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in neighborhood with the place, I would like to propose myself for such work.

As am a student currently
, I need to have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 experience in community services for my curriculum in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this year. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 voluntary work at your museum will be a great opportunity for it. Additionally
, I study history, it is my major at my University program, and can provide guide services in historical department of the museum. Also
, I speak Spanish and French, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it may be useful in providing services for foreign tourists if needed.

As I mentioned above, I study at the University, and according to my learning schedule, I will be able to work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 afternoons of Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays. If you Consider removing 'will'. (Usually, 'will' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless in the sense 'want to' or 'be willing to'.)accept
will accept
 me as a candidate and my schedule is convenient for you, I may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 immediately next
 week.

Waiting for your reply,

Thank you in advance,

Best regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.UlnarG ulnarGunnar
Gulnar
Possible spelling mistake found.
Yaylymova