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the letter complain the shop

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I am writing to complain about the recent order I had placed on your website. Last week, I bought two cartridges from your eCommerce site. I was excited when it arrived on time. However, when open the package, I realized that the product is out of date. So, I do not know what to do with these items and hope that you will replace them. I had ordered this item for my printer because it was out of ink. When I print the document, the text on the paper is so blurry that I can't read it. Moreover, I need to print documents for my course presentation next week and could you please tell me what actions you will be taking to get this rectified. I have already sent the cartridges I have received to your company address and I expect you to replace the inkpot and give me as soon as possible. If you are out of stock, please send me a full refund through shopeepay e-wallet so that I can order from other websites. Thank you for giving your attention and I look forward to hearing from you on my inquiry letter soon. Yours faithfully,
I am writing to complain about the recent order I had placed on your website. Last week, I
bought
two cartridges from your
eCommerce
site. I
was excited
when it arrived on time.
However
, when open the package, I realized that the product is out of date.
So
, I do not know what to do with these items and hope that you will replace them. I had ordered this item for my printer
because
it was out of ink. When I print the document, the text on the paper is
so
blurry that I can't read it.
Moreover
, I need to print documents for my course presentation
next
week and could you
please
tell
me what actions you will be taking to
get
this rectified. I have already
sent
the cartridges I have received to your
company
address and I
expect
you to replace the
inkpot
and give me as
soon
as possible. If you are out of stock,
please
send
me a full refund through
shopeepay
e-wallet
so
that I can order from other websites. Thank you for giving your attention and I look forward to hearing from you on my inquiry letter
soon
. Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter the letter complain the shop

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
197 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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