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a letter to my fr next week

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Dear…, I am writing to apologize you about our appointment next week. I obliged to cancel our meeting due to the fact that I have a short-term trip to Hai Phong City with my English class on Friday coinciding with arrangement we had prepared. I should have tell you soon but i had a plethora of exercises, consequently, now I have spare time to write a letter to you. Could we arrange a distinct day at next weekend? If you are busy, we can choose a superb day next month for our meeting? How do you think? To be honest, I am excited to meet you. How long haven’t we talk together? Don’t forget where I had appointed, at HEC coffee. Hope to your letter soon. Love,
Dear…,

I am writing to apologize you about our appointment
next
week. I obliged to cancel our meeting due to the fact that I have a short-term trip to
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Hai
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Phong
City with my English
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
on Friday coinciding with arrangement we had prepared.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
should have
Use past participle here: "told".
tell
you
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soon
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
had a plethora of exercises,
consequently
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
I have spare time to write a letter to you.

Could we arrange a distinct day at
next
weekend? If you are busy, we can choose a superb day
next
month for our meeting? How do you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
? To be honest, I
am excited
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you. How long haven’t we talk together? Don’t forget where I had appointed, at HEC coffee.

Hope to your letter
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
,
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IELTS letter a letter to my fr next week

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
127 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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