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the investment in tourism of some countries and benefits and drawbacks

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Hi guys, my name Huynh Anh and I am now studying at LQD secondary school. Today i will present you a problem that the investment in tourism of developing countries and its benefits. No wonder many developing countries are opening their doors to tourists. In my opinions, tourism play a dispensable part of most countries. This is like a key driver for sevice growth economic. people in many countries rely on tourism industry simply because this bring their high-income. For this reason, there are a number a benefits that tourism can bring to developing countries. Firstly, tourism provides regular employment for many local people who might otherwise be unemployed. They can find work in restaurants or hotels, or with tourist agencies as guides or drivers, for example, and earn regular wages. This, in turn, means that they may be able to save money and improve their standard of living. The second reason is that tourists spend money in the country and this allows local businesses such as restaurants, bars and taxi companies to flourish. In turn, other businesses, food suppliers or petrol stations, for instance, may be established in order to provide services to support the companies which cater for tourists. in brief,

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