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a letter to the advertisement

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Dear sir or madam, My mind went blank these days, due to I have really stressful days because of the pandemic of corona virus. I had a very significant exam last week, It was terrible because I had forget most of the things. I forget telephone numbers or addresses. I think this is the transition to becoming older maybe. My job role have changed and now I work in a library so I have to help other people to find the book they want and ofcourse I should know the books information and don’t forget them. I really used any method of memorizing, Unfortunetly All of them tend to fail. What about your methods? I have to know about the fees and how should I pay it, When is the deadline? My new job start about one year later and I think hypotheticaly how it woud be great if I learn this course in this next six month.
Dear sir or madam,

My mind went blank these days, due to I have
really
stressful days
because
of the pandemic of
corona virus
. I had a
very
significant exam last week, It was terrible
because
I had forget most of the things. I forget telephone numbers or addresses.
I
think
this is the transition to becoming older maybe. My job role have
changed
and
now
I work in a library
so
I
have to
help
other
people
to find the book they want and
ofcourse
I should know the books information and don’t forget them. I
really
used
any method of memorizing,
Unfortunetly
All of them tend to fail. What about your methods? I
have to
know about the fees and how should I pay it, When is the deadline? My new job
start
about one year later and I
think
hypotheticaly
how it
woud
be great if I learn this course in this
next
six month.
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IELTS letter a letter to the advertisement

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
158 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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