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write letter to your mother's friend providing information about upcoming visit

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Dear Mrs. Claire, I am writing in reply to your letter asking for information about my next-year arrival for my study. Firstly, I have made an airline reservation for 25th January. PA999 is my flight number. As planned, I will meet you at seven in the evening after landing at Diamond Airport. Secondly, I was wondering what the weather in Massachusetts likes. Recently, I have watched some videos on CNN about the weather forecast in January 2022. It seems that it will be snowing for a long time. Maybe I will bring some warm clothes. It is quite thick. So, the luggage can be more than three. Finally, could you possibly offer your advice about what I should do in Massachusetts such as culture, prices, or food? Also, I want to express my gratitude for your kindness in agreeing to my stay. I am looking forward to meeting you in January. Best Regards, Tran Gia Quynh
Dear Mrs. Claire,

I am writing in reply to your letter asking for information about my
next
-year arrival for my study.

Firstly
, I have made an airline reservation for 25th January. PA999 is my flight number. As planned, I will
meet
you at seven in the evening after landing at Diamond Airport.

Secondly
, I was wondering what the weather in Massachusetts likes. Recently, I have
watched
some
videos on CNN about the weather forecast in January 2022. It seems that it will be snowing for a long time. Maybe I will bring
some
warm clothes. It is quite thick.
So
, the luggage can be more than three.

Finally
, could you
possibly
offer your advice about what I should do in Massachusetts such as culture, prices, or food?
Also
, I want to express my gratitude for your kindness in agreeing to my stay.

I am looking forward to meeting you in January.

Best Regards,

Tran
Gia
Quynh
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IELTS letter write letter to your mother's friend providing information about upcoming visit

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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