It seems to be logical, at first glance, to agree with the idea that downsizing in the Elthyria improves employees’ economic status. However, the argument relies on a couple of less credible evidence or even doubtful assumption to consolidate its stance. In what follows, I will elaborate on them in details.
The 1st problem with the argument is that it could not provide more information about jobs status before 1999. Maybe employee had more jobs opportunity before 1999 as compared with after these years. Therefore, maintain that rates of unemployment during one decade-after1999- without providing enough information before 1999 is a disingenuous issue. Furthermore, since 1999 the rates of jobs creating in each year is not elucidated by the argument. Maybe there were more jobs opportunities in some years as contrast with other years and vice versa. Although workers could find appropriates jobs during the years which had more jobs positions, they suffering economic crisis during unemployment years. Therefore, comparing workers’ status in terms of their jobs opportunity during one decade is a fallacious issue, and the argument had better provide details information about rates of job-creating every year during the cited decade.
Even we assuming that the author gives additional information about rates of jobs creating, there are other unanswered questions. The author averts that since most of the jobs pertained to industrious ones, and these kinds of works tend to pay more salaries for their employees, so the economic status of the workers have been improving. Actually, without providing more information about the characteristics of jobs and employment, this conclusion is questionable. Maybe the location of the jobs company is not accessible for most of the employee, and they force to pay more money to take a taxi or van or another public vehicle to go their jobs. Maybe most of the workers are not eager to go industrious jobs, and they are keen to go in other fields such as Agriculture, free business, and educational positions. Without knowing employee traits and their tendency about jobs, it is difficult to predict that existing more opportunities in the fields of industrious leads to increase workers’ economic status.
Even if we know employers and jobs positions’ traits and conditions, there are other flaws towards a correlation between career time and workers’ economic status. Human being has other parts of life such as family, emotion, social responsibilities, and he is not comparable with machines which could work for a long time without considering other fields of the lives. Maybe working for a full time have more profits, yet it also has other disadvantages. For instance, working for a full time makes people sensible and skittish. In this scenario, they do not have more eager to spend time with their family and be friendly with them. Maybe, some employee is not eager to works for full-time since they are careful about their health and other parts of their life. Maybe some employee has educational or other scientific classes, and they only could work for part-time. Therefore, citing full time of the job opportunities does not mean that it improves employee economic status.
To evaluate this argument, we require to have additional information. The first pieces of information we need is the rates of jobs creating during the time. To better assessment, we also require to know more about jobs and employee conditions. Finally, to improve the argument as a whole, it is greatly recommended pay attention to human being needs including economic and noneconomic ones.
It seems to be logical, at
first
glance, to
agree
with the
idea
that downsizing in the
Elthyria
improves
employees’
economic
status
.
However
, the
argument
relies on a couple of less credible evidence or even doubtful assumption to consolidate its stance. In what follows, I will elaborate on them in
details
.
The 1st problem with the
argument
is that it could not provide more
information
about
jobs
status
before
1999. Maybe
employee
had more
jobs
opportunity
before
1999 as compared with after these years.
Therefore
, maintain that
rates
of unemployment during one decade-after1999- without providing
enough
information
before
1999 is a disingenuous issue.
Furthermore
, since 1999 the
rates
of
jobs
creating in each
year
is not elucidated by the
argument
. Maybe there were more
jobs
opportunities
in
some
years as contrast with
other
years and vice versa. Although
workers
could find appropriates
jobs
during the years which had more
jobs
positions,
they suffering
economic
crisis during unemployment years.
Therefore
, comparing
workers’
status
in terms of their
jobs
opportunity
during one decade is a fallacious issue, and the
argument
had better provide
details
information
about
rates
of job-creating every
year
during the cited decade.
Even
we assuming
that the author gives additional
information
about
rates
of
jobs
creating, there are
other
unanswered questions. The author averts that since most of the
jobs
pertained to industrious
ones
, and these kinds of works tend to pay more salaries for their
employees
,
so
the
economic
status
of the
workers
have been improving. Actually, without providing more
information
about the characteristics of
jobs
and employment, this conclusion is questionable. Maybe the location of the
jobs
company
is not accessible for most of the
employee
, and they force
to pay
more money to take a taxi or van or another public vehicle to go their
jobs
. Maybe most of the
workers
are not eager to go industrious
jobs
, and they are keen to go in
other
fields such as Agriculture, free business, and educational positions. Without knowing
employee
traits and their tendency about
jobs
, it is difficult to predict that existing more
opportunities
in the fields of industrious leads to increase
workers’
economic
status.
Even if we know employers and
jobs
positions’ traits and conditions, there are
other
flaws towards a correlation between career
time
and
workers’
economic
status
. Human being has
other
parts of life such as family, emotion, social responsibilities, and he is not comparable with machines which could
work
for a long
time
without considering
other
fields of the
lives
. Maybe working for a full
time
have more profits,
yet
it
also
has
other
disadvantages.
For instance
, working for a full
time
makes
people
sensible and skittish. In this scenario, they do not have more eager to spend
time
with their family and be friendly with them. Maybe,
some
employee
is not eager to
works
for full-time since they are careful about their health and
other
parts of their life. Maybe
some
employee
has educational or
other
scientific classes, and they
only
could
work
for part-time.
Therefore
, citing full
time
of the
job
opportunities
does not mean that it
improves
employee
economic
status.
To evaluate this
argument
, we require to have additional
information
. The
first
pieces of
information
we need is the
rates
of
jobs
creating during the
time
. To better assessment, we
also
require
to know
more about
jobs
and
employee
conditions.
Finally
, to
improve
the
argument
as a whole, it is
greatly
recommended pay attention to human being needs including
economic
and
noneconomic
ones
.