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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know that the meals provided in lunch, during a meeting held in your hotel on 24th July, was not satisfactory. We did a survey with all the people who participated in the discussion and we came to know that many persons were impressed with hotel, on the other hand there were crowd who mentioned that does not like the food. Firstly, they were attracted due to the fact that the service rendered by receptionist were appreciable and moreover, other staff's behavior were also acknowledgeable. Additionally, people were mesmerized with parking facilities. On the other hand, although we had a positive review, eatables provided in lunch was salty and office staff's had to avoid them. Furthermore, meat had a foul smell because of which they had to restrict themselves with it too. I request you to ensure the cooking staff to add the salt in moderate quantity and I also need you to take care of the meat by checking their expiry date and confirming whether they are properly refrigerated.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to
let
you know that the meals provided in lunch, during a meeting held in your hotel on 24th July, was not satisfactory.

We did a survey with all the
people
who participated in the
discussion and
we came to know that
many
persons
were impressed
with hotel,
on the other hand
there were crowd who mentioned that does not like the food.

Firstly
, they
were attracted
due to the fact that the service rendered by receptionist were appreciable and
moreover
, other staff's behavior were
also
acknowledgeable
.
Additionally
,
people
were mesmerized
with parking facilities.

On the other hand
, although we had a
positive
review, eatables provided in lunch was salty and office staff's had to avoid them.
Furthermore
, meat had a foul smell
because
of which they had to restrict themselves with it too.

I request you to ensure the cooking staff to
add
the salt in moderate quantity and I
also
need you to take care of the meat by checking their expiry date and confirming whether they are
properly
refrigerated.
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  American English
6 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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