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You have recently seen this advertisement for a course you are interested in. Read the advertisement and the notes you have made. Then write an email to the school using your notes

You have recently seen this advertisement for a course you are interested in. Read the advertisement and the notes you have made. Then write an email to the school using your notes 8G95k

Dear sir or madamI saw your advertisement while reading a newspapep and i am really thrilled because i have been looking for the summer course that you have advertised. Since i break up in summer, i do not want to waste my time and i desire to attend to the course. As i am interested in it, i have some questions about the course. I would appreciate if you tell the exact time of the course. I do not have a clue about the continuation of summer course. I live far away from the city centre so it will be better if you provide all the needed equipment. I am really worrying about the price because i do not have any extra jobs exept my scholarship. It will be nice of you if you inform about the meal which will be served or not. I look forward to your answer soonYour faithfully Sarah

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