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tell about your favourite invention

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Hello, my name is Song. I'm fourteen yearsold. Today, I willl tell you about my favourite invention. Nowadays, more and more inventions are being created, each with its own benefits. But the invention that impressed me the most was the smartphone. Nowadays, the smartphone is so popular, it is available almost everywhere on earth. In 1993, people invented the first smart phone in human history, it was a big step forward in science and technology. Currently, more and more smartphone products and companies are available in the market. Some of the famous smartphone manufacturing companies I know are Apple, Samsung, Blackberry. Smartphones have a lot of benefits for each of our lives. The first benefit, it helps people to communicate with each other easily whether at a distance or near. Not only that, the phone also contributes greatly to helping people work and look up necessary information. In addition, smartphones can also help us entertain and kill time in our spare time. On the other hand, smartphones also have harmful effects if we overuse it. Firstly, the regular use of mobile phones will affect eyesight. In addition, using mobile phones too much will make you isolated from everyone around, which is the main cause of depression. I think each invention will have its own benefits and harms, no invention is absolutely perfect. The same goes for smartphones, it has many benefits for our lives, but shouldn't overuse it. And for me, the smartphone is still a great invention, a huge step forward for mankind. Thanks for listening.

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