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Hello, my name is Song. I'm fourteen yearsold. Today, I willl tell you about my favourite invention. Nowadays, more and more inventions are being created, each with its own benefits. But the invention that impressed me the most was the smartphone. Nowadays, the smartphone is so popular, it is available almost everywhere on earth. In 1993, people invented the first smart phone in human history, it was a big step forward in science and technology. Currently, more and more smartphone products and companies are available in the market. Some of the famous smartphone manufacturing companies I know are Apple, Samsung, Blackberry. Smartphones have a lot of benefits for each of our lives. The first benefit, it helps people to communicate with each other easily whether at a distance or near. Not only that, the phone also contributes greatly to helping people work and look up necessary information. In addition, smartphones can also help us entertain and kill time in our spare time. On the other hand, smartphones also have harmful effects if we overuse it. Firstly, the regular use of mobile phones will affect eyesight. In addition, using mobile phones too much will make you isolated from everyone around, which is the main cause of depression. I think each invention will have its own benefits and harms, no invention is absolutely perfect. The same goes for smartphones, it has many benefits for our lives, but shouldn't overuse it. And for me, the smartphone is still a great invention, a huge step forward for mankind. Thanks for listening.
Hello, my name is Song. I'm fourteen
yearsold
.
Today
, I
willl
tell
you about my
favourite
invention. Nowadays, more and more inventions are
being created
, each with its
own
benefits
.
But
the invention that impressed me the most was the smartphone. Nowadays, the smartphone is
so
popular, it is available almost everywhere on earth. In 1993,
people
invented the
first
smart
phone
in human history, it was a
big
step forward in science and technology.
Currently
, more and more smartphone products and
companies
are available in the market.
Some of the
famous
smartphone manufacturing
companies
I know are Apple, Samsung, Blackberry. Smartphones have
a lot of
benefits
for each of our
lives
. The
first
benefit
, it
helps
people
to communicate with each other
easily
whether at a distance or near. Not
only
that, the
phone
also
contributes
greatly
to helping
people
work and look up necessary information.
In addition
, smartphones can
also
help
us entertain and kill time in our spare time.
On the other hand
, smartphones
also
have harmful effects if we overuse it.
Firstly
, the regular
use
of mobile
phones
will affect eyesight.
In addition
, using mobile
phones
too much will
make
you isolated from everyone around, which is the main cause of depression. I
think
each invention will have its
own
benefits
and harms, no invention is
absolutely
perfect. The same goes for smartphones, it has
many
benefits
for our
lives
,
but
shouldn't overuse it. And for me, the smartphone is
still
a great invention, a huge step forward for mankind. Thanks for listening.
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