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. I think they should definitehttravel because it is good to broaden your mind and ideas

. I think they should definitehttravel because it is good to broaden your mind and ideas aJ8DX
his idea is something I agree with. I think they should definitehttravel because it is good to broaden your mind and ideas Travel does this 'Lou can also learn a language from it An example is one friend of mine who travelled and when she returned home she hakl_a more positive outlook and ideas about the world. It is good for this reason. It gives you a chance to experiment and find out about yourself This will also make you more understanding of the people and cultures around you.
his
idea
is something I
agree


with. I
think
they should
definitehttravel
because
it is
good
to
broaden


your mind and
ideas
Travel does this 'Lou can
also
learn a language from it An example is one friend of

mine who travelled and when she returned home she
hakl_a
more
positive
outlook and
ideas
about the

world
. It is
good
for this reason
. It gives

you a chance to experiment and find out about yourself This
will


also
make
you more understanding of the
people
and cultures around you.
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IELTS letter . I think they should definitehttravel because it is good to broaden your mind and ideas

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89 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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