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Dear frank, I was stupefied to hear about your accident lately, hope you are doing well now and that it’s not boring in hospital. The match on Saturday was disappointing, from the start we were dominating on the opposition team scoring goals with lot of ease, as drinks time came opposite team made few players change and match continued. Second half of the match was completely astonished they were easily clearly our defence scoring goals back-to-back. whole match took a turn. Ronaldo and crostino heroes of the play whereas other players supported a lot in reaching victory which was impossible to reach. The match was held in our university grounds which is your favourites, pitch was in fact full of grassy and day was sunny with huge winds blowing as it rained lately, climate was too supporting for the viewers to come and watch the match. We all have planned to come and meet you in hospital soon, Our best wishes with you Hoping soon your recovery Your truly, eddie

Dear frank,

I was stupefied
 to hear about your accident lately, hope you are doing well This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 and that it’s not boring in hospital.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontesttrialgameracetestbout
match
 on Saturday was disappointing, from the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 we were dominating on the opposition team scoring goals with It seems that an article is missing.a lot of
lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
ease
, as drinks time came opposite team made few players This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontesttrialgameracetestbout
match
 continued. Second half of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontesttrialgameracetestbout
match
 was completely astonished they were easily
clearly
 our Possible spelling mistake. 'defence' is British English.defense
defence
 scoring goals back-to-back. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhole
whole
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontesttrialgameracetestbout
match
 took a turn. Ronaldo and Possible spelling mistake found.crossingcostingCristinacrestingcroftingfrosting
crostino
 heroes of the play whereas other players supported a lot in reaching victory which was impossible to reach.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontesttrialgameracetestbout
match
was held
 in our university grounds which is your Possible spelling mistake. 'favourites' is British English.favorites
favourites
, pitch was in fact full of grassy and day was sunny with huge winds blowing as it rained lately, climate was too supporting for the viewers to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 the match.

We all have planned to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you in hospital This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
, Our best wishes with you Hoping This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 your recovery

Your truly
,

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