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Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take K6qL
I am Noemi Canonce one the tenant in M-5 City Tower. I am writing this letter to complain about the furniture in my flat. My dining table legs are weak and it giving us a difficulty to use it because it is obsolete also the chairs has a stained which is very disgusting. Additionally, the hinges of the kitchen cupboard are rustry and it is making an eerie noise everytime we open it. I hope you can change it too. I would like to remind you also that you agreed and It is been written in my tenancy contract that you will replace the old furniture with the new one within it three months but until now there are no action yet. It will be highly appreciated if you replace it as soon as possible otherwise I will cancel my agreement with you and find another place. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regarding this matter. Yours faithfully,
I am Noemi
Canonce
one the tenant in M-5 City Tower. I am writing this letter to complain about the furniture in my flat.

My dining table legs are weak and
it giving
us a difficulty to
use
it
because
it is obsolete
also
the chairs has a stained which is
very
disgusting.
Additionally
, the hinges of the kitchen cupboard are
rustry
and it is making an eerie noise
everytime
we open it. I hope you can
change
it too. I would like to remind you
also
that you
agreed
and It
is been
written in my tenancy contract that you will replace the
old
furniture with the new one within it three months
but
until
now
there are no action
yet
. It will be
highly
appreciated if you replace it as
soon
as possible
otherwise
I will cancel my agreement with you and find another place.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon
regarding this matter.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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