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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. other people think that in today's was subjects Life science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. other people think that in today's was subjects Life science and technology are more important than history. ag89
History is the backbone of a nation. Science and technology are the future of a country. Some people believe that history is important and some of them belief science and technology are important. In my opinion I believe that both subjects are important for us. Everything of our life depends on science and technology. From our wake up in the morning till go to bed at the night everything depends on technology. we use mobile phone, computer, electricity, car everything are depending on science. We use car, bus, cycle for our travelling. If there were nothing we could not survive. Now a days our life is fully depended on science. Whenever we feel sick we take medicines and it is science. Scientists make these medicines by researching on science. We could not think a movement without science and technology. History is the main identity of a nation, culture and people. We can know about a new nation by knowing their history. Every culture and nation has their own history. By gaining knowledge from history we can learn many things. Every country has his own history. In 1971, Bangladesh fight for their independence from Pakistan. There was a liberation War for nine months. All these things we can know from our history. we can know the people who were barve enough to sacrifice their lives for our independence. So, from my point of view, it is clear that all subjects are important in school we cannot throw one down for another. It is important to give same value to both of these subjects.
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. In my opinion I believe that both subjects are
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for us. Everything of our life depends on
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science
and
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technology
. From our wake up in the morning till go to bed at the night everything depends on
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, culture and
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. We can know about a new
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by knowing their
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. Every culture and
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has their
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we can learn
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things. Every country has his
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.
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that all subjects are
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in school we cannot throw one down for another. It is
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to give same value to both of these subjects.
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IELTS letter Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. other people think that in today's was subjects Life science and technology are more important than history.

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