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informal letter to a friend to give him advice

informal letter to a friend to give him advice m3G3n

Dear Adam, Thank you for contacting me, I hope you're doing well. I'm so excited to offer you some pieces of advice. If I were you I wouldn't go to college, I think you'll just waste your time there since you'll never get an experience. on top of that, you'll be asked to pay back your students loans after graduation. It's a bad idea to have debts especially while studying. My opinion is to search for a job instead of being under pressure in college. Plus, you'll be able to save some extra money beside gaining more experience so then you can start your own business. I'd recommend for you to get a job in GT company I've heard they are hearing web developers without a degree or you can just work as an adminstrative assistance in CA since your father is good with management which means he can help. Let me know what you think about it. Take care,

Dear Adam,

Thank you for contacting me, I hope you're doing well. I'm This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 excited to offer you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 pieces of advice.

If I were you I wouldn't go to college, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwethey
you'll
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 waste your time there since You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwethey
you'll
 never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 an experience. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOn
on
 top of that, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwethey
you'll
be asked
 to pay back your students loans after graduation. It's a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 to have debts especially
 while studying.

My opinion is to search for a job instead
 of being under pressure in college. Plus, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwethey
you'll
 be able to save This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 extra money beside gaining more experience This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 then you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 business.

I'd recommend for you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a job in GT This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 I've heard they The verb 'hearing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are hearing
 web developers without a degree or you can This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 work as an Possible spelling mistake found.administrative
adminstrative
 assistance in CAPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
since your father is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 with management which means he can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me know what you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about it.

Take care, 