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Dear Mr. Eftekhari, I am writing with regard to your fabulous performance in your last concert, which was the best performance I have ever seen by a singer in my life. As a singing lover, I have been following your activities since my childhood and I have always dreamed of coming to your concert and now I think there is no word to describe how I was feeling during your performance. As mentioned above, becoming a professional singer has always been my goal and your activities have been inspiring. I started my musical career 5 years ago by participating in drums classes, then 1 year later, I began singing classes with Mr. Folani. He introduced me to a chorus group 2 years ago, which was a turning point in my journey, however I am not satisfied yet. Recently, I have heard from one of my friends that you are running some classes, the best news I could ever hear in my whole life. Therefore, I want to strongly request you to accept me as one of your students. I look forward to your kind reply. Kind regards, Amir Khamesipour