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several complaints about about reception

several complaints about about reception 9QqWn

Dear Min, I am writing with regard to the suggestions than can make our reception area a better place. The complaint that had been made by most of the individuals visiting our firm is that the reception does not have any chairs to sit which makes them uncomfortable. Moreover, visitors have to wait for long time in order to get the information needed as we only have one receptionist. This area plays a key role as this will be the entry point which decides their first impression. In addition, reception is a place where everyone gets the information they need and the area should be tidy. Firstly, few chairs should be arranged and they should be placed in appropriate positions. Furthermore, a new receptionist should be hired which makes a total of two receptionists and visitors can get the information quickly by avoiding the long wait time. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Hahd.

Dear Min,

I am writing with regard to the suggestions than can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 our reception area a better place.

The complaint that had been made
 by most of the individuals visiting our firm is that the reception does not have any chairs to sit which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 them uncomfortable. Moreover
, visitors This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 wait for long time in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the information needed as we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 have one receptionist.

This area plays a key role as this will be the entry point which decides their first
 impression. In addition
, reception is a place where everyone This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 the information they need and the area should be tidy.

Firstly
, few chairs should be Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).arranged, and
arranged and
 they should be placed
 in appropriate positions. Furthermore
, a new receptionist should be hired
 which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 a total of two receptionists and visitors can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the information quickly
 by avoiding the long wait time.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely
,

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