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several complaints about about reception

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Dear Min, I am writing with regard to the suggestions than can make our reception area a better place. The complaint that had been made by most of the individuals visiting our firm is that the reception does not have any chairs to sit which makes them uncomfortable. Moreover, visitors have to wait for long time in order to get the information needed as we only have one receptionist. This area plays a key role as this will be the entry point which decides their first impression. In addition, reception is a place where everyone gets the information they need and the area should be tidy. Firstly, few chairs should be arranged and they should be placed in appropriate positions. Furthermore, a new receptionist should be hired which makes a total of two receptionists and visitors can get the information quickly by avoiding the long wait time. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Hahd.
Dear Min,

I am writing with regard to the suggestions than can
make
our reception area a better place.

The complaint that had
been made
by most of the individuals visiting our firm is that the reception does not have any chairs to sit which
makes
them uncomfortable.
Moreover
, visitors
have to
wait for long time in order to
get
the information needed as we
only
have one receptionist.

This area plays a key role as this will be the entry point which decides their
first
impression.
In addition
, reception is a place where everyone
gets
the information they need and the area should be tidy.

Firstly
, few chairs should be
arranged and
they should
be placed
in appropriate positions.
Furthermore
, a new receptionist should
be hired
which
makes
a total of two receptionists and visitors can
get
the information
quickly
by avoiding the long wait time.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Hahd
.
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IELTS letter several complaints about about reception

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
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