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You are going to invite your friend to opendoors to your new supermarket.You write a letter to your friend about your supermarket.

You are going to invite your friend to opendoors to your new supermarket. You write a letter to your friend about your supermarket. kWg52

Dear Mr, I am writing to invite you to opendoors of my new supermarket which is located in Namangan city near the LSL. First of all, it is honour to me to invite such a person like you to my supermarket as you are my the closest friend and my neighbour. Moreover, if you visit to my place, you have an opportunity to buy anything with 50% discount only the first day. You may come with your family members and you can find everything need to you. In addition to this, I can make you one chance which if you purchase one daily mechanic, one extra price only for you. Coming to my new trade place, you make me happy. Plus, there are several types of clothes. Girls for clothes are very cheap. You can buy for your girl. I hope you will have a visit and make us happy by visiting. I look forward to hearing from you, Yours faithfully, X X X

Dear Mr,

I am writing to invite you to Possible spelling mistake found.open doors
opendoors
 of my new supermarket which is located
 in Possible spelling mistake found.NamingRomanianAmandaJamaicanTasmanianAmalgam
Namangan
 city near the LSL.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, it is Possible spelling mistake. 'honour' is British English.honor
honour
 to me to invite such a person like you to my supermarket as you are my the closest friend and my Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbour' is British English.neighbor
neighbour
. Moreover
, if you visit to my place, you have an opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 anything with 50% discount This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the first
 day. You may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 with your family members and you can find everything need to you.

In addition
 to this, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 you one chance which Did you mean "is"?is
if
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 one daily mechanic, one extra price This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for you. Coming to my new trade place, you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 me happy. Plus, there are several types of clothes. Girls for clothes are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
. You can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 for your girl. I hope you will have a visit and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 us happy by visiting.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Yours faithfully
,

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