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Selectors likely to mull over Hardik, Shaw and Prasidh for WTC final squad

Selectors likely to mull over Hardik, Shaw and Prasidh for WTC final squad GMP72
Dear Sir. Hello. I have a request to your hotel. I have been there and I hope you to remember that I conference your hotel few days ago. My name is and room No. is 707. The date is start 12/02/14 to 17/02/14. Actually, I lost my report for presentation. That is total 280paper. It was specially requested to Japan Uni for I month. I'll using the report when I get a level of doctor. I have no enough time for collected report again. Because the presentation will be opened after 4 days. I really want finding the report, and I belive you already have it when you before reading this mail. Protect the lost goods is due the hotels. And already it's a law. When you finished reading it, then just call me or leave your message to my asistant. I have a plan that when I finised the presentation, I'll be go there again for celerbrat party with my friends.
Dear Sir.

Hello. I have a request to your hotel. I have been there and I hope you to remember that I conference your hotel few days ago.

My name is and room No. is 707. The date is
start
12/02/14 to 17/02/14. Actually, I lost my
report
for presentation.
That is
total 280paper. It was
specially
requested to Japan Uni for
I month
. I'll
using
the
report
when I
get
a level of doctor.

I have no
enough
time for collected
report
again.
Because
the presentation will
be opened
after 4 days. I
really
want
finding
the
report
, and
I belive
you already have it when you
before
reading this mail.

Protect the lost
goods
is due the hotels.

And already it's a law.

When you finished reading it, then
just
call me or
leave
your message to my
asistant
. I have a plan that when I
finised
the presentation, I'll be
go
there again for
celerbrat
party with my friends.
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IELTS letter Selectors likely to mull over Hardik, Shaw and Prasidh for WTC final squad

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  American English
7 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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