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QUESTION: Write a letter to M/s. H.M.T. Corporation Chandigarh, complaining that the wristwatch you recently bought from them does not function properly and ask for a replacement.

QUESTION: Write a letter to M/s. H. M. T. Corporation Chandigarh, complaining that the wristwatch you recently bought from them does not function properly and ask for a replacement. wM9Pn
QUESTION: Write a letter to M/s. H. M. T. Corporation Chandigarh, complaining that the wristwatch you recently bought from them does not function properly and ask for a replacement. Dear Madam I am writing to complain about wristwatch which I recently bought from your shop. After only two days, things to go wrong. On the 9 th December I visited one of your local shops in order to buy a new wristwatch for myself. Looking around shop I encountered expected item and I asked a shop assistant about item. After getting all information I decided to purchase it. Two days later, I feel to be wrong with wristwatch. When I saw in the morning, it was 5 o‘clock. So I slept and I late at work. I think the wristwatch was wrong. Furthermore, when she tried watching another the same thing happened. In addition to this, the wristwatch did not saw right. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon as possible and receiving a new wristwatch. Please give this matter your immediate attention. Your faithfully. Mrs Gulzoda Sulaymonova
QUESTION: Write a letter to M/s. H. M. T. Corporation Chandigarh, complaining that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wristwatch
you recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
from them does not function
properly
and
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ask for
a replacement.

Dear Madam

I am writing to complain about
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wristwatch
which I recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
from your
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shop
. After
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only
two days, things to go
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wrong
.

On the
Did you mean "9th"?
9 th
December I visited one of your local
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shops
in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wristwatch
for myself. Looking around
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shop
I encountered
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
item and I asked a
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shop
assistant about item.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
getting all information I decided to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
it. Two days later, I feel to be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wristwatch
. When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
in the morning, it was 5 o‘clock.
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So
I slept and I late at work. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wristwatch
was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
.

Furthermore
, when she tried watching another the same thing happened.
In addition
to this, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wristwatch
did not
This form is ambiguous and can be used as past tense. Confirm that you are using the intended base form of the main verb after 'to do' as an auxiliary verb..
saw
right.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
as possible and receiving a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wristwatch
.
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Please
give this matter your immediate attention.

Your
faithfully
.

Mrs
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Gulzoda
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Sulaymonova
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IELTS letter QUESTION: Write a letter to M/s. H. M. T. Corporation Chandigarh, complaining that the wristwatch you recently bought from them does not function properly and ask for a replacement.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
179 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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