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Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this.

Dear Sir, I am writing this in regards to draw your attention to your mistake in your last article about the golden city of Surat, which is located in Gujrat India. First of all, I would like to let you know that I read your newspaper article every day and I really admire it. But last week you wrote an article on Surat City, which is my Native place. I was born in Surat and I know everything about this town. Secondly, I was very disappointed when I read your article about my home town, In that article, you mention that Surat city is not a safe city to leave but that is not true if you consider the crime rate of this city and compare it with another city you will found it is the safest city to leave. However, In your column, you also mention that the crime rate of this city is 60% which is also wrong. Please check your resources again because as per my knowledge crime rate of this city is only 20%. I know you know your responsibility better than I but as a good citizen, It is my responsibility too that raise my voice if I see any wrong thing happen. I also want to do a humble request to you and ask you to create another article about my city and apologize for your mistake and provide truthful information about Surat city. I hope you will understand my point of view and accept your mistake. Yours faithfully, Ravi
Dear Sir,

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about the golden city of Surat, which
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in Gujrat India.
First
of all, I would like to
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every day and I
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last week you wrote an
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article
on Surat City, which is my Native place. I
was born
in Surat and I
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know
everything about this town.

Secondly
, I was
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very
disappointed when I read your
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article
about my home town, In that
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article
, you mention that Surat city is not a safe city to
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leave
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but
that is
not true if you consider the crime rate of this city and compare it with another city you will found it is the safest city to
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leave
.
However
, In your column, you
also
mention that the crime rate of this city is 60% which is
also
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wrong
.
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check
your resources again
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as per my knowledge crime rate of this city is
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only
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know
you
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know
your responsibility better than I
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good
citizen, It is my responsibility too that raise my voice if I
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see
any
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wrong
thing happen. I
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want to do a humble request to you and ask you to create another
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article
about my city and apologize for your mistake and provide truthful information about Surat city. I hope you will understand my point of view and accept your mistake. Yours
faithfully
, Ravi
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IELTS letter Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this.

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255 words
6.5
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