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COMPLAINT LETTER TO THE MANAGER

COMPLAINT LETTER TO THE MANAGER 25LJ6
Dear Sir, I am writing regarding the amount of noise coming from the new canteen, which has just opened near my unuversity residence. I am pleased that we have this facility. But It remains open up to 12: 30 every night each night. In Addition, it is heart shoutings and loud music the sounds of motorbikes which inturrupts us sleeping or sometimes reading in our bedrooms. In both cases people try to concentrate on doing well despite of noise. So it causes a lot of problem for all of us who live in residence. I would like to suggest that it may eliminate working hours till 11 on weekdays. On weekends it should not work because of provide pease for us. I will apperciate you confirmation for this situation. Thank you for your attention to this important matter. Kind regards.
Dear Sir, I am writing regarding the amount of noise coming from the new canteen, which has
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just
opened near my
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unuversity
residence. I am
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pleased
that we have this facility.
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But
It remains open up to 12: 30 every night each night.
In Addition
, it is heart
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shoutings
and loud music the sounds of motorbikes which
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inturrupts
us sleeping or
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sometimes
reading in our bedrooms. In both cases
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people
try to concentrate on doing well
Did you mean "despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?
despite of
noise.
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So
it causes
Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: "a lot of problems".
a lot of problem
for all of us who
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live
in residence. I would like to suggest that it may eliminate working hours till 11 on weekdays. On
The comma is probably missing here: "weekends, it".
weekends it
should not work
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because
of provide
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pease
for us. I will
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apperciate
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'you'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
you confirmation
for this situation. Thank you for your attention to this
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important
matter. Kind regards.

IELTS letter COMPLAINT LETTER TO THE MANAGER

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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