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Informal letter which was written to congratulate the friend

Informal letter which was written to congratulate the friend gYP61
Dear Nargiza I'm writing congratulate you on your birthday. I wish you good luck, good fortune, success and good health. If you were here, we would celebrate your birthday party together. Do you remember your last birthday party? We commomerated it with all our friends. We danced all the night. But today you are in Amerika. You aren't with us. Nevertheles, I hope you will celebrate your birthday with happiness. I know you very interested in nature and rare animal, so I send to you book which about nature and animals with this leter. I think it please to you. Don't forget to send photos to me. I congratulate you again. Write soon. Rayhona.
Dear
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Nargiza


I'm writing congratulate you on your birthday. I wish you
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good
luck,
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good
fortune, success and
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good
health.

If you were here, we would celebrate your birthday party together. Do you remember your last birthday party? We
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commomerated
it with all our friends. We danced all the night.
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But
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today
you are in
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Amerika
. You aren't with us.
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Nevertheles
, I hope you will celebrate your birthday with happiness.

I know you
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very
interested in nature and rare animal,
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so
I
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send
to you book which about nature and animals with this
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leter
. I
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think
it
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please
to you. Don't forget to
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send
photos to me.

I congratulate you again.

Write
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soon
.

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Rayhona
.
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IELTS letter Informal letter which was written to congratulate the friend

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
114 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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