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Recently there was a Strom in your city .Due to this Strom, your telephone line got cut off .you reported this incident to the authority twice but nothing has happened.Write a letter to the company for the same . In your letter .explain difficulties that you are going through . Inquire the status of next repair schedule .express your disappointment.

Recently there was a Strom in your city. Due to this Strom, your telephone line got cut off. you reported this incident to the authority twice but nothing has happened. Write a letter to the company for the same. In your letter. explain difficulties that you are going through. Inquire the status of next repair schedule. express your disappointment. BLAEX
Dear Manager, I express my dissatisfaction on your failure to fix the phone line on 16 March 2015. Last week, price Edwrd Island was hit by ides of March snowstorm. Islanders witnessed one of the worst snowstorms and the snow door successfully cleared in Charlottetown. Environment canada reports 48 centimeter of snow on Sunday. Evidently, the phone lone got cut off due to this savage weather. I reported this incident - my complaint ticket number is 56984563- to the maintenance department and the officer confirmed that it would be repaired within a day or so. He explained the situation that there were too many affected phone lines to repair in a day. I understood the helplessness of maintenance department and cooperated. However, it has been over two days to this situation and nobody has visited our place to fix the phone line yet. It is hard to do without a phone line these days. Considering such an overwhelming situation, I granted some leeway and relaxation but not to this extent. I want you to update the status of our complaint and have it fixed at the earliest. Yours sincerely, Rupinder Kaur
Dear Manager, I express my dissatisfaction on your failure to
fix
the
phone
line
on 16 March 2015. Last week, price
Edwrd
Island
was hit
by ides of March snowstorm. Islanders witnessed one of the worst snowstorms and the snow door
successfully
cleared in Charlottetown. Environment
canada
reports 48
centimeter
of snow on Sunday.
Evidently
, the
phone
lone
got
cut
off due to this savage weather. I reported this incident
-
my complaint ticket number is 56984563- to the maintenance department and the officer confirmed that it would
be repaired
within a day or
so
. He
explained
the situation that there were too
many
affected
phone
lines
to repair in a day. I understood the helplessness of maintenance department and cooperated.
However
, it has been over two days to this situation and nobody has visited our place to
fix
the
phone
line
yet
. It is
hard
to do without a
phone
line
these days. Considering such an overwhelming situation, I granted
some
leeway and relaxation
but
not to this extent. I want you to update the status of our complaint and have it
fixed
at the earliest. Yours
sincerely
,
Rupinder
Kaur
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IELTS letter Recently there was a Strom in your city. Due to this Strom, your telephone line got cut off. you reported this incident to the authority twice but nothing has happened. Write a letter to the company for the same. In your letter. explain difficulties that you are going through. Inquire the status of next repair schedule. express your disappointment.

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  American English
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